Chapter 8 – Page 053
Another fun exercise in redrawing old pages, with a light dash of trauma.
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Panel 1 (narrow):
Nancy tightens the straps on her gloves and grits her teeth.
NANCY (box): Sentiment is the enemy.
Panel 2 (narrow):
Greyscale flashback. Nancy yanking Si out the path of the V2.
NANCY (box): Sentiment is the tool of the forces of randomness.
Panel 3 (narrow):
Si, hand being held off-panel, is all cried out and dead inside as she’s lead through the streets.
NANCY (box): It flattens, it deadens, it drags events out of order.
Panel 4 (narrow):
Nancy angrily presses her thumb on a button on her instrument.
NANCY (box): Effect ceases to follow cause.
Panel 5 (narrow):
Greyscale flashback. Si tells Nancy about her missing friend. A friend Nancy already knows about.
NANCY (box): Sentiment wallows us in cause, we try to change it in our heads forever.
Panel 6 (narrow):
Rab Q holds Si’s limp hand as she’s lead on without effort.
NANCY (box): They seize on it, tell you it can be different.
Panel 7 (narrow):
Nancy’s boots stomp down the street.
NANCY (box): They tell you they can make it stop hurting.
Panel 8 (narrow):
Flashback. Nancy isn’t sure how to react to Si crying in the underground, believing Alice blames her.
NANCY (box): But it’s supposed to hurt.
Panel 9 (narrow):
Si’s leaden feet nearly trip on the flagstones.
NANCY (box): And I don’t need something that hurts me.
Nancy tightens the straps on her gloves and grits her teeth.
NANCY (box): Sentiment is the enemy.
Panel 2 (narrow):
Greyscale flashback. Nancy yanking Si out the path of the V2.
NANCY (box): Sentiment is the tool of the forces of randomness.
Panel 3 (narrow):
Si, hand being held off-panel, is all cried out and dead inside as she’s lead through the streets.
NANCY (box): It flattens, it deadens, it drags events out of order.
Panel 4 (narrow):
Nancy angrily presses her thumb on a button on her instrument.
NANCY (box): Effect ceases to follow cause.
Panel 5 (narrow):
Greyscale flashback. Si tells Nancy about her missing friend. A friend Nancy already knows about.
NANCY (box): Sentiment wallows us in cause, we try to change it in our heads forever.
Panel 6 (narrow):
Rab Q holds Si’s limp hand as she’s lead on without effort.
NANCY (box): They seize on it, tell you it can be different.
Panel 7 (narrow):
Nancy’s boots stomp down the street.
NANCY (box): They tell you they can make it stop hurting.
Panel 8 (narrow):
Flashback. Nancy isn’t sure how to react to Si crying in the underground, believing Alice blames her.
NANCY (box): But it’s supposed to hurt.
Panel 9 (narrow):
Si’s leaden feet nearly trip on the flagstones.
NANCY (box): And I don’t need something that hurts me.
