Chapter 1 – Page 74
It all gets a bit Cathy Come Home in today’s update, despite Si’s protestations to the contrary.
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Panel 1:
Si glances at a sign on the fence outside the tower block saying “Jerusalem Holdings.”
INTERFACE:
Clue Deciphered!
SI (box): Then there was something else I noticed.
Panel 2:
Si stands outside a grey edifice car park, also saying it was maintained by “Jerusalem Holdings.”
SI (box): I’d walked past the sign at school a bajillion times and never noticed it.
SI (box): No way it was a coincidence.
Panel 3:
Si adjusts her hoodie to avoid the cops on a Camden backstreet.
INTEFACE:
Stealth Meter: [----|-----]
SI (box): Maybe didn’t need no Nancy after all?
SI (box): Maybe I could crack this case all by meself, show the feds I wasn’t as dumb as they thought I was?
Panel 4:
Si hides under a railway arch and produces her violin.
SI (box): Maybe. Then everything’d be back to normal and Alice would still be a thing my brain made up.
SI (box): No. Finding Nancy’s the whole point of this trip.
Panel 5 (narrow):
Si plays a bit of Max Richter’s “November” under the arch.
SI (box): Because if Nancy was as good at making the coppers look like idiots as I thought she was…
Panel 6 (narrow):
A map materialises in Si’s string-space, pinpointing Jerusalem Holdings’ location. Someone starts to wander past.
SI (box): Then wherever this jerk was hiding…
SI (box): She’d be there.
Panel 7 (narrow):
A guy has flipped a coin at Si’s feet. Si jerks out of string-space to argue with him.
INTEFACE:
Received 37p
SI: Wait-!
SI: I’m not-!
SI: Awwwww…
Si glances at a sign on the fence outside the tower block saying “Jerusalem Holdings.”
INTERFACE:
Clue Deciphered!
SI (box): Then there was something else I noticed.
Panel 2:
Si stands outside a grey edifice car park, also saying it was maintained by “Jerusalem Holdings.”
SI (box): I’d walked past the sign at school a bajillion times and never noticed it.
SI (box): No way it was a coincidence.
Panel 3:
Si adjusts her hoodie to avoid the cops on a Camden backstreet.
INTEFACE:
Stealth Meter: [----|-----]
SI (box): Maybe didn’t need no Nancy after all?
SI (box): Maybe I could crack this case all by meself, show the feds I wasn’t as dumb as they thought I was?
Panel 4:
Si hides under a railway arch and produces her violin.
SI (box): Maybe. Then everything’d be back to normal and Alice would still be a thing my brain made up.
SI (box): No. Finding Nancy’s the whole point of this trip.
Panel 5 (narrow):
Si plays a bit of Max Richter’s “November” under the arch.
SI (box): Because if Nancy was as good at making the coppers look like idiots as I thought she was…
Panel 6 (narrow):
A map materialises in Si’s string-space, pinpointing Jerusalem Holdings’ location. Someone starts to wander past.
SI (box): Then wherever this jerk was hiding…
SI (box): She’d be there.
Panel 7 (narrow):
A guy has flipped a coin at Si’s feet. Si jerks out of string-space to argue with him.
INTEFACE:
Received 37p
SI: Wait-!
SI: I’m not-!
SI: Awwwww…

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